Commute #56: Milwaukee Avenue Bus Stop #18424
by NIKKI RENÉE FRISINGER
the twirling girl
frozen in time
motionless marquis
poised in a hue
of 1982
transcendent
and alone
a corner hub of aspiration
whistles a familiar tune
while our crowd waits for the bus
silent
together but alone
crossroads of dreams
and broken memories
a man once told me
while we waited
one half hour
under milwaukee avenue construction
heavy bus delays
lost in a traffic jam
of time
he stood
among those laborer men
several decades ago
waiting for a change
looking for a drink
obscured
except for
a singular glimmer of hope…..
a moment in time
under one transformative twirl
a man approached
circa 1995
and asked:
“ye ready for your life to change?”
on this day
we boarded the bus
public transit’s
chats of community
a human fuel
soul’s nourishment
in the daily commutes of life
decades diminished
a rear view mirror
in a dancing day
o, maryla polonaise
of yesterday
you are ageless
……and spinning
now headed north
in the direction of career
where the man at the bus stop
once was a beginner
who was guided
to tomorrow
by kind grace of a stranger
a stranger decades before
who believed in a sullen face
who had stood
across the street
from the crowds
beneath the dancing
girl in a twirl
shining a light
for anyone in need
on the grid
of transformation
at Belmont and Milwaukee
a dancing girlfor sale or lease
No More.
Nikki Renée Frisinger is a writer, worker, and Avondale community arts organizer. When she is not mired in operational analysis of her work in global children’s book publishing, she is busy telling stories of community creativity at work on Substack: https://avondalia.substack.com She is working on her first collection of transit-inspired essays for a slated 2026 publication.